Monday, 25 July 2016

Baked Beans On Toast Story (Literacy).

We will learn to give feedback to other students’ reading and writing work.

Baked Beans On Toast Story + Activity.

- What is your favourite part and why?
- Write a short paragraph about it.
My favourite part in this story, Is how Uncle Andy gave Jordan the chance to let him go to the movies, for the new Jackie Chan movie that's was out in the cinema, then coming home to a delicious baked beans Toast that was very delicious, made by his mum.

Feedback (Ana- Lei)

I love how you are very specific about Why and What happened in this story and I very much admire that.
( Henrietta) Thankyou Ana-Lei.

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