tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772688647110627372.post6221099281149198717..comments2019-05-07T12:53:09.593+12:00Comments on Henrietta: WELCOME BACK TO TERM 2 EVERYONESPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772688647110627372.post-1486991751410035502016-05-16T16:53:12.778+12:002016-05-16T16:53:12.778+12:00Good writing Henrietta but there's a few thing...Good writing Henrietta but there's a few things that you need to work on . Sentence structure needs improvement in terms of linking sentences together and also always remember to proof read and double check before publishing . Keep it up <br />From:Mum Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com